Wednesday, April 15, 2015

Fighting Bullying with Babies

     At the beginning, the author showed to readers what his problem and solution are in the title so that readers can understand what he want to express easily. For the first paragraph, it introduced what bullying is and using some examples from big magazines to show that bulling is a really problem in recently society.

     He used White House conference and the Department of Education’s “guidance letter” to make sure readers believe him and understand that these information are published by the government. These references make readers understand bullying’s meaning easily and then be attracted because they want to know what the author’s idea is to solve this problem that even government cannot solve.


     If he did not clarify what he means by bullying, readers will feel confused and misunderstand what he want to express and even think he want to write about other things such as education problems and young children’s problems. For giving involves of bullying, the author used the definition of bullying and showed the reasons of causing bullying. After that, he used some bullying examples and forms to support his idea and gave some numbers for strengthen his ideas. 

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