Fighting
Bullying with Babies
At the beginning, the author showed
to readers what his problem and solution are in the title so that readers can
understand what he want to express easily. For the first paragraph, it introduced
what bullying is and using some examples from big magazines to show that bulling
is a really problem in recently society.
He
used White House conference and the Department of Education’s “guidance letter”
to make sure readers believe him and understand that these information are published
by the government. These references make readers understand bullying’s meaning
easily and then be attracted because they want to know what the author’s idea
is to solve this problem that even government cannot solve.
If
he did not clarify what he means by bullying, readers will feel confused and
misunderstand what he want to express and even think he want to write about
other things such as education problems and young children’s problems. For
giving involves of bullying, the author used the definition of bullying and
showed the reasons of causing bullying. After that, he used some bullying
examples and forms to support his idea and gave some numbers for strengthen his
ideas.
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